Falling from the heavens,
the moonlite angels fly.
Searching for the seekers.
The open wide air -
flows through your blood.
The ripples against the hearts.
Wings open wide -
to seek new angels
of the moonlite.
Followers stepping up -
the glass stairs
to the heavens.
The quest is over -
till the next day,
comes as the sun sets off.
Author notes
moon
A contest entry
- ~Moonlit Walks... by Nature Song.
575 points, ended June 29, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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written as a light breeze
excellent flow we were pulled into every line and
verse....floating as the angels of the moonlight!
love it!
way to write! truly lovely indeed!
ears/Seattle
(the air open wide)keeps repeating to me.
i see you twisted it..hmmm...interesting!
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What a beautiful job you did on this one! I really enjoyed this read tremendously!!
Best of luck in this contest!
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This was such a wonderful poem!! it just seemed to roll off the tongue... The imagery was so vivid and soft.. It was a wonderful poem on the prompt.. And beautifully written.. I really enjoyed reading this.. best of luck...
Angel
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Angel
Wings open, to seek new angels into their hearts. Under a moonlite sky, high in the heavens with the glass staircase.
This poem has great imagery, you see see the angels flying to greet new one's as they enter into heaven.
Good luck in the contest.
Tisha
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Angels of the moonlight, glass stairs into the heavens. As the sun rises, so begins another day! Wonderful imagery and poetic muse here! Good luck in the contest..~Sie
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very soft and moving ith some lovely impressions to make it seem quite haunting.
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Impressive.
darkly beautiful poem.
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