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Storm Across The Sea

Lord Jesus lay Your hand upon her heart as I do in my small way
Show her the blessings behind the tragedy that surrounds her
Help her remember that each one of us, never knowing when, will meet you
In Heaven for our new life with our God whom we have always believed in as Almighty
Help her to see the living that still need her as she needs You
Let her dreams be of good tidings and rest as she must
Tell her our humanly bodies and minds are not as strong as our new ones
In the Kingdom of Heaven where our savior awaits us
Think of the home that the Lord has supplied us when we cross over
Remember of Jesus saying He would be back and He returned
The truth is unknown to us therefore we have faith
Faith moves mountains and removes the doubts
Mourn as we should but remember the promise and the proof
My heart go out to you in your present situation and I know I'll be next soon
Family is the hardest to let go of, remember where they are going
May our souls and spirit come together
To find the peace that the Lord Jesus spoke of
And await the day He comes for us to join ours that went ahead of us.
Remember the achievement was in the leaving this life for a much better one
That's what saved us all to live with that faith and hope
With the help of the Holy Spirit, I pray for your peace of mind and spirit
From one unknown friend to another unknown friend "Peace Be With You"



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Baring my soul to a very special friend in hopes for the best. To Kelle Marie (bless you)

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  • stavykm gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    Oh So Beautiful

    Oh Don this is just a beautiful poem of reality and truth. The truth about just having to have that faith to move on not only for the ones we lost but for our own selves. Your heart is beautiful and your love for the Lord was very comforting in your write. It's early morning still and I so needed to read this. It's like a beautiful prayer. I thank you so much for your loving compassion and spiritual support with encouragement. Thank you so much for entering, for you have blessed my heart and best of luck in the contest.
    Many Blessings
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie


    • Quiet places
      June 21, 2008
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      Thank you Kelle Marie for accepting this humble gift as a way to let you know that there are many that want to soften your burden and I am just one. In the realm of life what are the naked truths. We live ,we die, and we have faith on a promise given to us by the Almighty Himself. Everything else is His will for our life. We sometimes get caught up in the storm but getting to the other side is our goal and our destiny. Peace be with you my friend and know you are not alone in your struggles. Don


  • Gwenevere
    June 21, 2008

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    A lovely poem of support for a friend in need.We need friends to share the bad times as well as the good.Well done don, Ros

    • Quiet places
      June 21, 2008
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      Thank you Ros for the inspiring comment and compliments on this special poem for a special lady. Her story is a painful one. Thanks a gain Don


  • eyesofanangel524
    June 21, 2008

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    Don, wonderful sentiments. I found peace within your words of wisdom and a gentle embrace of angels wings when the tears cascaded from my eyes. I do hope your friend finds comfort in your words and peaceful message. Sometimes saying good bye is the hardest part of all we shall ever do. Knowing how much they need us and us of them. You have captured this so elequently. God bless my friend...may none of us ever walk alone and in reading this...I know we dont.

    • Quiet places
      June 21, 2008
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      Thank you for the compliments and this cherished comment my dear! A piece of heaven can come from anyone that believes. I do pour out my soul to others as best I know how. It just seems so right. Thanks again hun. Don


  • Heart Sutra
    June 21, 2008

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    very sweet poem for your friend....

    • Quiet places
      June 21, 2008
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      Thank you Zayra for such a wonderful comment and compliments on this special write to a special lady. Always a pleasure hearing from you. Don


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    These are such beautiful comforting thoughts that I know Kelle will cherish! Your heart is showing here and it is truely a blessing to have a friend like you!


    • Quiet places
      June 21, 2008
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      Thank you Jacks for such an inspiring comment and compliments on this special write to a special lady. My heart pours out to her knowing her pain. Thanks again and thank you for being a friend. Don

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