And every second you're gone
I miss you more,
and just seeing your smile
warms my heart,
and your laugh takes it to boiling point.
To be next to you
makes my heart whole,
but to see your back turned
makes my heart shatter
like glass on the rocks below.
And yes, you could fix it
but without you,
how long can I be held together
with bobby pins & sticky tape?
Author notes
7. My love, of all the sighs in the world, the deepest is in your arms.
1. How long have you been on AllPoetry? I joined the site in August 2007.
2. What inspired you to use your username/ how was it chosen? I can't actually remember, I wanted a new username, and I was talking to a friend one day when I was upset and they told me to never stop Loving, Dreaming or Believing, so I guess that's why I chose it....
3. How often are you on AllPoetry generally? Pretty much everyday, sometimes if I have a lot of homework or something I won't come on that day for long but I always come on to check my messages....
4. Would you be willing to commit to a poem a week contest? Yeah sure, as long as I'm able to keep my muse up there, sometimes it gets a bit sad and runs away for a while.....
5. Tell me some interesting/unknown things about you. I don't fall for people very easily unlike a lot of people my age and when I do I usually fall extremely hard and take a very long time to pick myself back up when it ends.... I've never told anyone that before, not even my best friend....
6. What is your real name, so I can address you personally (if you prefer not to say, nicknames are fine) Erica =]
7. Is there anything I should know? That sometimes my muse goes wandering away and I can't find it for a while but hopefully I will be able to commit to this contest, if I'm unable I'll be sure to message you explaining why =]
A contest entry
- -Completely Corporate- Prelims. by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended June 22, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I like the title that you have given to this piece. It seems so much more like lyrics - like a song that you could sing - just the tone. Anthony.
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