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All Tangled Up

I feel it clutch my veins,
Capture my heart,
And make me gasp.
It's as if there were
No words in the universe
To describe this feeling.

Entangled,
Entwined,
Separated,
Abandoned,
Wrapped up,
Strapped down,
Impossible to untangle,
Futile to decipher,
Even more useless to
Try to make it stop.

I feel this,
I breathe this,
I drink this in,
And although this is Hell,
It is me.
And sometimes,
It can be Heaven.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Fated Circle
    June 26, 2008
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    Nifty

    Just got back on after forever and was reading my old stuff...and you commented quite a few of mine...so i shall return the favor. I just cant figure out what steals my breath that i breathe in that feels like heaven and hell all at once...hmph.
    I say just stand up and walk it off -_- haha
    ~nick~