like a dagger digging deep
boring a cavern into my soul
my heart bleeds for your unspoken words
Author notes
Prompt:
"Sharp"
three lines
A contest entry
- Quickie...Three lines...Sharp by Luna Tique Fringe.
525 points, ended June 21, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Sometimes the things we need to hear but are never uttered hurt the most. Loved your message and a brilliant write in brevity. well done!!
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I'm not sure what you're saying...as I read this it comes across as if it were saying that the heart is like the dagger...is that your intention?
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the left unspoken words are the dagger sharply cutting the heart in two
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