Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Is [Goodbye] forever?

I dont really know what to say.
    After all... There is no easy way
To tell someone goodbye.
Especially the one
that
    you

        love.

So what happens now..? Where do I go..?
What do I
            do..?
After all You
      were everything.
And now I
        have nothing.


But it's my own fault, right?
        For being so weak.
Pretending to be strong
    Just to break in the end.

So this is my goodbye
                  I hope you wont hate me
forever.

And when I start to miss you...
      I'm already starting to miss you...

I'll have to remember that
                          It was ME
who let

              YOU

                      .......go.

Author notes

She still loves you, fool.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression? • Line numbers
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?) (Line numbers)

Comments

1 - 18 of 18

  • MissyK
    August 14

    Edit | Reply
    "But it's my own fault, right?
    For being so weak."
    This line really hit me! The overall piece was an amazing read.


  • The Voice of Victory
    July 1

    Edit | Reply
    Good bye is not forever as there may me a chance to say hello again at another time or place.
    .............
    GOOD WRITE!


  • JoyfullMask
    June 21
    Edit | Reply

    Wow

    Hey M8 Long Time this was really good i see where your coming from if this is personal based its tough but you can get through it your poem was well written evn well spaced and set up i thought it made it seem like reading right out of your brain or heart keep up the good work So "Wow" nice one friend
    Yours truthfully
    The Masked One


  • VampireBrat
    June 21
    Edit | Reply
    aww this is so good.....


  • oikevois baby silver member
    June 21
    Edit | Reply
    I'm assuming this about Rayne and Thomas. Never let your low view of yourself keep you from love. Love is the ability to look past the outward flaws and just love the inside. Rayne~ NEver give up sweetie. I feel this way constantly with Aiden, but I know he loves me. Let Thomas love you.

    Love you Rayne, and Aiden

    mylee

  • earthangel33
    June 21

    Edit | Reply
    really great poem....i've just been reading all your work and must say.....amazzing.....will be keeping an eye out for more of you poems.....thanks for shareing


  • Devoted Huntress
    June 21

    Edit | Reply
    Aww this poem is so sad. It actually brought tears to my eyes with the feeling of sorrow that came as I read the words.

    I hope everything is alright hun!


  • devils angel
    June 21

    Edit | Reply
    awww sweet as... it's hard wen u let someone special go, wen after you done it it realise what you've actualy done... but gr8 wrte

1 - 18 of 18