He begs for silence
From me, stillness he craves
And I die in his hands
A contest entry
- just a quickie by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended June 21, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Welcome ladies and Gents by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
450 points, ended July 11, 2008, 77 entries
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As I read this, a really weird noise escaped my lips. I can't really type it like i can *scream* or something. Anyway....this is insanely good. Short, eerie, scary and just great.
Warmest,
Mylee -
wow.... totally lost for words.. really brief but it has a huge impact.. great job
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Wow. even shorter, and even more grasping!
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I like how you can make such a short piece and still have it come through so strongly.
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woo
gave me a chill!
best of luck in the contest
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wow, darkly profound and attention grabbing... x
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wonderfuly done
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