Within his light
Loved; not alone
My darkness learned to heal
And fly again
(struggle)
Author notes
10 poets
15 words
Prompt ~ in his hands
A contest entry
- just a quickie by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended June 21, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what you really think
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this is such a ebautiful and faith filled piece sweetie. your words show the real reasons for peace and calmness and it really left me thinking. you have written a deep thought that uplifts the readers mind as it intrigued me to think over your words. a wonderful piece well done
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Beautiful thought lifting ones mind to places of peace yet i'm intrigued by the struggle. I suppose when we become used to a comfort zone no-matter what its charge, be it negative or possitive we will have to struggle to regain our abbility to break free of its certainty. It is wonderful that you have been supported by the light of giving to rise from the limmitations of darkness and breathe life into your world, it can be hard when we are down... we all need help to rise again. Wonderful thoughts. Meow...
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so beautifully uplifting... x
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Aww.. this is really beautiful Sweetie...
just lovely..
All the best !many
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Hm... this one confused me a bit, and I had to reread it a bit... but I think I finally get it
I like the idea of the darkness learning to heal.. and I think I understand the struggle. I kind of think that we all have that struggle, and that's what makes us human... right? I don't know. But that may just be me. Keep on writing!
Alex -
This is beautiful sis.
I love you loads
Good luck
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