Standing in wintry triumph
memories invade my mind
of warm sweet zephyrs
waltzing in spring.
Precious moments, love
summer's harmony I remember
like an nightingale's song
uttering soft promises.
Atonement between two souls
sitting cozy on this
old park bench
under my gaudy arms
as I stir the breeze.
Lifting them I pray
for another sunny day
when lovers will comes again
in bloom with the flowers.
Then my teal carpet
will beckon children to romp,
children to play
I shall still stand in awe
of each season; until
my time slips away.
Author notes
Option 2 - Lonely
http://i285.photobucket.com/albums/ll71/artchwat/snow_bench_tree_trinity_park.jpg
Written from the tree' point of view....
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration with Options by Dancing Feather.
700 points, ended July 10, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - AP 2008: Become Published by B Chandler.
2000 points, ended August 3, 2008, 40 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Incredible piece
Godmother, indeed this is seaonally beautiful. Good luck being featured in the book.
-ephiphany
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I agree with Paul....but this is what I'm going to add:
There's something alluring about this write that keeps me coming back to read and each time I read the write, more vivid images come to mind -
very nice, Smooth in texture this takes you on that gentle breeze and carries you through the change of seasons around its branches as the the tree whispers its narration to you.. enjoyed this
Cyber Artist
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nice way of puting it. the peom even flowed into the pic awsome.
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This is very beatiful
I loved every word I read!
Very nicely done
Best of luck in your contest
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Lovely Write
As hope filled as can be with gads of imagery. Nice way of turning the picture from dreary to hopeful. Lots of talent flowing from your fingers to the keys.
Good luck!
Best Wishes, Jennifer
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Great write. Very creative. Thank you for entering the contest. Good luck!
~Ookami~
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