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A Cutting Tongue


No blade was needed.
Only words were used.
A heart severed from love.

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the scar unseen

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  • Talking Toni gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    Amazing..............

    How much meaning you packed into three lines...words can cut worse than any knife or blade..but they can also heal as well as ..still you make your point very clear and ver well...Thanks for sharing!!!~~Toni~


  • dustookie2
    June 20, 2008

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    Oh that sharp tongue of goodbye. leaves no scar yet it marks for life. Brillinat take on the prompt.Good luck.


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    June 20, 2008
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    sharp, indeed