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Greatness

I fell to the ground.
I looked around.
I saw you.
Come on through.
Helped me up.
Said "waz up?!"
I stared into your friendly eyes.
They were not wearing a grim disguise.
I knew that it was you.
I couldn't believe a friend so true.
We hung out for the rest of the day.
Sit, eat, chat and, play.
Then i went home and thought of you.
Then i wrote a poem too.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 22, 2008

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    Humm a wonderful thought with a internal voice by your dear friend...well done..my thanks for such a wise entry in my contest...