When it comes to you...
I don't have a clue
What you might need
or where this will lead
You tell me be strong
when I am then I'm wrong
You want me to be willing to cry
when I do you think I lie
You want me to give you my best
than you say give it a rest
You need to have your space
but by your side you say is my place
So...when it comes to you
I never know what to do
To please you is anyones guess
but I'll give you all and nothing less
A contest entry
- Pen A Poem by 2lullabyhaven.
575 points, ended July 8, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hi a nice crystal clear poem with ateady flow and good rhythm. I really felt I could relate to it I guess we all can thanks, and best wishes littlefishone
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Thanks for your kind comment...sadly there's alot that can relate.
Thanks much
darlintlc
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whoa. this is a great poem. I think that you should worry about yourself though. I think that in a relationship is the only place that a person has the right to be selfish. If you're being hurt then you have to rid your life of what is hurting you. Its hard but thats what should be done.
That being said, I think that this poem was remarkable. It was filled with so much emotion and passion. I loved it. You are such a great writer.
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Thanks again for the comment and ur so right...get rid of what hurts u!!
darlintlc
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Sometimes you just can't win! So I say make yourself happy and let them worry about it. Just be true to yourself and the rest will work out one way or another.
A very thought provoking poem!
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This is a touching write, thanks for your entry and good luck in my contest lol
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