clouds
disperse
revealing
familiar sights
across memory’s
heightened recollection
and glittering beliefs shine
in changing perspective's new view
through passing storm crystal clarity
as insight shifts in the spreading sunlight
Author notes
Picture prompt: painting, Lights by H.P. Kolb
A contest entry
- Forms, Forms and More Forms Etheree Contest by ShelleyA.
900 points, ended June 21, 5 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Good title. Perfect form. Good line breaks. A very good write. Thoughtful. Good flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice, alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Thank you for your entry.
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