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Sharp as Knives

His sharp words
Stabbing my heart
Shedding my endless love

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I dont have anything to say about this poem. I usually would have gone with something a little more happy, but I feel a little down.

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  • Luna Tique Fringe
    June 20, 2008

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    nice, but a little edit could sharpen it.

    sharp words
    stabbing my heart
    Shedding my endless love


  • foreverair
    June 20, 2008
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    o_O

    i love the last line...