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Reflection.

Missing image

You have shattered

me to bits

leaving hundreds

of reflected images

that has followed

me for years.

Every time I try

to pick up the pieces

I get cut

so i'll just stay here

where you left me

on the floor

and hope I can deflect

some of the pain

you caused me.

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  • Lexie
    July 12

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    this poem. it was very very content, yet so so powerful. it was full of pain. and i enjoyed reading it. great great poem.


  • Rose of Ireland gold member
    June 22
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    Profound and Powerful!!!


  • Serene Rose
    June 21
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    this is very dark, very painful. it reflects the pain and hurt very well

  • Nature Song silver member
    June 20

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    Some pain of that which was caused by you. Often love tens to do that to us, shame we never learn! ~Sie Great job penning this poem, and goes so well with the pic.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    June 20
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    such sadness so well explained and placed here.


  • Midnight-x-Rose gold member
    June 20

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    Object/thing itself: a broken mirror
    About: how it's going to cause 7 years [days or months, however you see the superstition] of bad luck on the person who smashed it.

    Good luck. Let me know if you can't work with and I will give you another one :]
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