Point of the blade
Cutting through hearts
Like the evil smile at the thought of innocence
Author notes
um... hope that's ok
A contest entry
- Quickie...Three lines...Sharp by Luna Tique Fringe.
525 points, ended June 21, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short Poems' Wanted!! by SignifyingNothing.
450 points, ended October 19, 2008, 123 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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*Smile* I like an evil little poem every now and then. I like the sound of the last line, but I think evil would oppose innocence rather than smiling at it- unless it is smiling at the thought of corrupting innocence.
This was a great little poem. Thanks for entering my contet and letting me read it. -
Evil would smile at innocence...no one could deny that!!
great poem and good luck!!
darlintlc
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wow...Powerful!
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that last line is cookin'
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thanks... lolz i like the last line too =P
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