the story of my life.
you && me.
[we were like one heartbeat. i miss you this far.]
its the colision of your fatal kiss that makes this so hard.
two lovers--
torn away by self inhibitions
driven by selfishness.
nostalgia && remorse run through these veins
&& not another day will make this pain go away.
[who ever said time heals everything lied]
the glue that held the pieces of my broken heart
shattered it instead.
&& not a day goes by without feeling the pain.
i often wonder if you see me as i see you.
i used to be the apple of your eye,
the moon as it met the night,
the diamonds in the pristine sky.
[has this feeling died?]
my heart yearns for a touch;
just a little bit of lust
for old time paassion's sake.
just one more time.
come on,
you && me.
[we made the world jealous babe.]
take my hand && i swear i'll never let go.
Author notes
i was in love once, thought i left it, && it followed me...
i was inspired by bitter image.
A contest entry
- Dirty Pretty, form, or 20 Words by Kari.
390 points, ended June 21, 2008, 4 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me any kind of love you want by ApocalypseAngel.
450 points, ended June 27, 2008, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Aw, I love the part about taking your hand. That's so sweet. It reminds me of the song "I swear".
Thanks for your entry!
Kari
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