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Within

People say that love,
come's from within,
But if I went and thought about it,
I think I'd probably grin,
Inside every person,
Is some good and bad,
But most people are either,
Sane or are they Mad?

When I went and thought about it,
A smile to my face,
Because I'm just a nice kid,
Doing things to discriminate,
People say I'm evil,
People say I'm a fag,
But guess who I killed?
It's me. I'm mad.

Locked up and laughing,
Inside my own mind,
Here where love can't attack me,
I'm where no one can find,
Nobody knows what happened,
To their darling daughter,
All they know,
It's my feeling to the slaughter,

People KNOW I'm evil,
People KNOW I'm mad,
Every body thinks of me as a stupid emo fag,
If this isn't pain I dunno what is,
I can smell the end,
Of insanity,
As I hang myself, there.




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  • darkstinger
    June 23, 2008
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    Intense!!! THe emotion and feelings you have are strong. Good job, keep up the good writing.

    Ray

  • blondiekj
    June 20, 2008

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    Woah! That was intense!! It shows a lot of strong emotions, and hate. Good job though, it is very well written! Keep writing! =)