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Touch of Death

My mind born pure of any hatred but-
Touch sears with screaming murder.
Good morals drive my intentions-
Usually ending in disaster.

What I wish to accomplish-
Cannot be harsh or cruel.
Yet when it comes down to it-
Around me blood tends to pool.

It is that I am still here, but-
Cannot control what I've done or do.
Which tortures my pure loving soul-
Because all I really want is you.

So burdened with this curse-
Life's masterpiece cannot complete.
I live half-lives trying to be a whole-
I don't want this day to repeat.

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(Contest Propmt) How can you play a masterpiece when your hands scream murder?

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  • ckwriter69
    June 20, 2008

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    Nicely done, dark emotions expressed and good word choice throughout the write. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest.


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    June 20, 2008
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    Very good. Conveys alot of emotion and pain. Well done.