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Blue Moon

Nude in the threads of off-white silk,

Rooted feathers deep within your shoulder blades,

  Wings swathe you from the prowling oblivion,

    Translucent apparitions of souls wander the azure,

      As you crouch by the willow intimate to the

        Spherical globe ardent, blanching away but contemporary,
   
          Restless aura cascades into the sapphire atmosphere
 
            Listen to the whispers and words of the waves
 
              From the gentle push and pull that makes it so

                Taste the serenity that fills the fortitudinous tempest

                    Rest in the serenade of the spirits entombed within

                      The obsidian white tinted sapphire

Author notes

Option 5 - Blue Moon



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  • PainItazuki
    July 4, 2008
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    wow deep words...i like it ^-^
    good luck


  • Mister Monday
    June 20, 2008

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    I agree with my partner. There are a lot of big words. Lol. Good write and thanks for entering. Good luck!

    ~Ookami~


  • Dancing Feather gold member
    June 20, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry. I'd got to say, there's a lot of big words in it. Keep up the great penning. Thank you for entering. Good luck