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What I've done

Underneath the sky we sleep..
  ..The sunlight in my eyes keeps me from seeing clearly..
    Deep beaneath the stars I'm lost..
      The darkness in my heart keeps me fro letting go..
        ..Of everything I fear the most..
           
And I'm alone...
                And I'm ashamed..
                                Hold me in your arms..
                   
      ..And now I'm sorry for what I've done..


                Tied around the mess I've made..
                ..The air I breathe much harder every time I speak
The words you've heard a thousand times..
                            I've tried before.. but now I feel like letting go..

              ..Of everything that hurts the most..
                      and now I'm begging you.. don't let go..

And now I'm alone...  and I'm ashamed...  hold me in your arms..
            because I'm sorry for what I've done..

    And after all is said and done..
            ..You pick me up no matter where I fall
              No matter where I fall..
                      ..You hold me in your arms..
                                Forgive me when I'm wrong..

And I'm alone..
      And I'm ashamed..
          Hold me in your arms..
              And now I'm sorry for what I've done..

                  And I'm alone..
                    And I'm ashamed..
                      Hold me in your arms..
                        ..And I'm sorry for what I've done..

                   
                     

Enjoy.. ^^;;

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  • plainoljoe
    October 9, 2008

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    we've all done and will continue to do things of shame. Just remember that after you ask God for forgiveness you must forgive yourself in order to receive it

    Joe


  • HonorablyFallen silver member
    June 23, 2008

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    "Tied around the mess I've made.." wow wonderful!! I looked at your page and Im not sure how old you are but your great . I will being reading more of your work -Sarahlynn


  • The Black Poet
    June 23, 2008

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    F%$#ing shit dude, that is one of the best poems that I have ever read. Congratulations and don't stop writing!!!

    The Black Poet
    xxx