Rarely am I possessed by raging wrath
If possible I prefer a more passive path
The devilish demons are often demanding
I was defeated by anger, yet I am standing
With a cracked rib, and two black eyes
After vigilantes sought my demise
Though tempted by the tree in the Lord’s garden
I hate my sins and pray my heart won’t harden
What is your problem asked the stranger
Without giving a thought to the danger
I was angry and ready for a fist fight
But I would learn a lesson that night
For just a little dignity I would have killed
Not caring about blood that would be spilled
I cried to the Almighty, why have I been forsaken
I felt all that was holy had left, but I was mistaken
Though the demon of wrath had taken his toll
The prince of peace has redeemed my soul
He has forgiven my trespasses as I have others
I pray for my enemies with my sisters and brothers
A contest entry
- The Seven Deadly Sins Contest by Ethereal One.
600 points, ended July 4, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Your words express your experiences with rage, and how you chose to handle it. Your rhyming is very good, and the images you create here are very strong.
Thank you for this entry, and best of luck.
Ethereal One



