The ink of
heartbreak
flowed with tears
of sorrow,
words smudged on
paper and in my mind.
Goodbyes are wet,
soaked in the sadness
of losing you
and drown'd
with the rose on
the grave of love.
Author notes
The option i chose is (lost love)
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration with Options by Dancing Feather.
700 points, ended July 10, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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short but good. can relate to this
good luck!
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Your words paint the picture of how I feel. Love, Juls
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A beautifully written poem!!!
and a very tenderly scripted thought, evoking the pain of love of all the past, present, and future ages of our humanity combined. Good luck in this contest!!! Peace and love, Cyn
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Great write, I enjoyed reading it.
Keep up the great penning. Thank you for your entry and Good Luck
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Very nice. I can feel the mood you're trying to put in it. Good write. Thanks for entering the contest.
~Ookami~ -
Soft and sad dear lady. Beautiful. Love, C
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