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A streak of crimson

The eternal streak of crimson
A red rose in a field of lilies
Caused by that of man
An invention of destruction

Now there are cubs without a mother
With a streak of crimson
with the invention of man
the world is without cubs

When will it stop
It is human nature, it is eternal
With it, there will be no peace
there will only be streaks of crimson
A red rose in a field of lilies

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  • Black Rose Reaper
    June 21, 2008

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    this is some what confusing i understand what your getting at but the first stananza more represents creation amung the norm rather than the destruction of the second stananza