There better be somehow

I see the enemy knocking at my door
just like the one, the one I new before
"Twisted sister" why do you cry some more
I thought it's kind of strange
I thought you new the score...
I thought you new the score...
I thought you new the score...
I thought you new the score...

It's really sad, it's sad sometimes
I can't explain, what she re-arranged
Your like an angel searching through the skies
but then she took a look deep inside

Just to open your mind,

Guess I think it's a crime

Just to open your mind,

Guess I think it's a crime

Just to open your mind,

Guess I think it's a crime

Just to open your mind,

Guess I think it's a crime

It's really sad, it's sad sometimes
I can't explain, what she re-arranged
Your like an angel searching through the skies
but then she took a look deep inside

A contest entry

WHAT DO YOU SEE? [2] by skylark anointed. 800 points, ended August 6, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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By me, right now

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skylark anointed
March 21

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Hello, Timespell... I never got the chance to thank you for entering my contest and I just stopped in to re-read your poem and leave a comment. Hope all is well with you.

There is intense personal struggle in this one and I can tell that these would make great lyrics.

All the best,
Andrea