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Vala

In a wasteland, a baby was born
Parents slaughtered, in a nights flash
Leaving a streak of a crimson thorn
Leaving the baby to dash

His run for eternal
As each mile passes so does his life
Living his life nocturnal
Memories like a knife

Now a man, a slayer of nightmares
A blade of beauty
A future of affairs
A future of duty

A life of revenge
For the fleeing child
For a child who forgets why to avenge
All he know is he is in the wild


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  • Black Rose Reaper
    June 21, 2008
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    not the best and not very clear this is more of a very condensed story


  • robnj silver member
    June 20, 2008
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    very descriptive