Dear Heavenly Father,
I'm thankful for thy care,
I'm thankful for good health
and I'm thankful that you're there.
Help those in need to overcome
any struggles they have in life,
ease their burdens
and help them handle strife.
I ask thee Heavenly Father,
please comfort them with love,
give them a feeling of warmth
and reassurance from above.
Please be there for those in life
who are suicidal and depressed,
Help them to know that they are loved
and that life is just a test.
Guide them in getting the help they need
and give them the strength to get by.
Bless them through their pains and sorrows
and comfort them when they cry.
Keep them safe from harm or accident
and especially those abused by men,
with love in thee I say these things
in the name of Jesus Christ, Amen!
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Option #3 Write me a prayer in poetic form.
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awww.. very nice write here. I liked this a lot because it meant so much with such simple words. sometimes simple words are the best ones to use.. anyway, great job. my only advise to you would be to maybe read this aloud a couple times and check for awkward areas. otherwise, great job. please message me with the tittle if you make any changes
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