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Curtained Beef

With face soused & numb.
I hold my breath and pray for -
- light at the end of...

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Written January 1st, 2004

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  • Dolce
    May 27, 2004
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    Hmmm, image pops into my head... hmmmm.... of a bobbing head... hmmm.... soused and numb.... hmmm....


  • May 12, 2004
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    hahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!

    haiku... funniest thing i have read in a week.

  • Tu Leona
    May 12, 2004
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    Neat. Different from all of my other entries. Good Job.

    ~>Tu Leona<~


  • theDARK1 gold member
    January 3, 2004
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    this was nicely sensuous. thank you for entering.


  • Naughtygrlred
    January 1, 2004
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    how did i miss this one u did a haiku dam or is this new

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