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The glass of memories

A man sits on the lakeshore
With the water reflecting the moon
A glass showing war
Appears ashore
The man scared and a sinner
Leaves the lake
The memory breaks

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  • Black Rose Reaper
    June 21, 2008
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    not very deep its basicly a guy sees something he doesn't want to and leaves