Time goes on,
Hearts heal,
Memories fade,
Things that matter,
they turn to ash.
Things that hurt so deeply
Begin to scab and fall away.
My heart was destroyed,
from the inside out,
within one year,
its begun to heal outside in.
My path of self discovery,
my path of becoming who i am,
has had so many detours,
within 365 days gone by.
So many plans fell through,
so much ice around their hearts.
I have been trying to be,
"That ray of sunshine."
Clearing out the darkness,
healing their souls,
melting the ice that surrounds their hearts.
365
A number
A number of days,
the amount of time,
its taken me,
to finally be able,
to say your name.....
Author notes
a year of letting them go
a year of self discovery
and a year of letting "YOU" go..
This was for BS. (not anymore, i let you go)
A contest entry
- A year in reverse. by bonjourbunnie.
700 points, ended August 5, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wonderful poem.....i love the imagery....
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Wow. So, am glad you let YOU go.
and i am glad, you are fine now?
Anyways, i liked this poem,
i enjoyed reading it a lot,
and I can relate to this.Good work
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thanks dearheart
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welcome.
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I really enjoyed your play with with number of days, and the imagery is quite good.
Good luck in the contest.
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