She lives in a dark place,
All of the time it takes to sate a pole.
(No silly! Not the flesh and blood!)
Her shoes are meant for ballerinas-
But the only dancing she can do in them involves legs spread-
WIDE.
His eyes follow her,
More binding than anything she wears.
She forgets that there used to be a time when it wasn't important-
When she didn't balance at the edge of a whip for money (love).
Wanting and Needing are the same word-
Desire and Possess equally so.
How could she know better?
She lives in a dark place,
Trying hard to sate a pole.
Author notes
Jonquil Eglantine
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Comments
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Okay,I have no idea what "sate" means, and I can't get the whole idea of the poem without the defintion. Can you tell me?
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(Not author but browsing) Sate means to satisfy or placate a desire, if there is no alternative meaning that is.
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Yes, that definition is correct in the context I used it in.
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