GOD!
You're so naive.
spilling your advice
like trust the lord and you'll get what you need
and working is so unneccesary
and time is frivolous.
I beg to differ.
I have no god to give my life to
or a lover to provide for me
and only a few moments to call my own.
I fight the man,
and pay my rent
and do my chores
and sing my songs
And.
I'm still happy.
Don't think your way
is the only way
and
try to preach the rest of us
into believing in your beliefs,
because
diversity is beautiful.
Trying to make this into a song. Suggestions would be appreciated.
Comments
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Very nice write. I know someone who I'd love to send this out to. She is the type of person who enjoys pressing her religion in others faces.
"Diversity is beautiful."
That is my favorite line of this poem.
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Diversity is beautiful in so many way its hat makes us....... us and its what defines us in so many ways I’m glad you found your own way to happiness with out the guidance of others but some aren’t so lucky some people need the guidance lol like me im lost with out some one there telling me what to do or what to think so you are truly special and so is this master peace you have created out of your own mind image and no one else’s so I look forward to reading more of your wonder full poems thanks for this opportunity to read
<3 shlottie <3
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