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My Brother Mitchell

A younger brother lost
So sudden - no time for goodbye
All that is left are memories
And these tears that I cry

No rhyme or reason
Just suffering and pain
Never able to see him,
My only brother, in this life again

He was a child of God
His faith was strong
He is in Heaven now
His eternal home

Maybe in the life hereafter
One can only hope
He will be there waiting

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  • The Otep
    August 31
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    This is such a wonderful tribute! Greatly written, with emotional pain and sadness- as well as longing.

  • fillurhands
    June 28
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    He did run his race well. He didn't have an enemy in the world. He worked hard his whole life to support his family never complaining. He never had a cross word for anyone. He was one of a kind. I was lucky to have had him for a brother.

  • james119
    June 27
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    It's great to know this world is not the whole story.
    Sounds like he ran his race well.


  • shlottie
    June 20

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    i know ust how you feel its such a short poem but its easy to understad your pain ..
    i just lost a friend mun last week
    and i lost my mom 4 months agao
    its always hard to loos the people who have helped you in your times of need
    and a brother is close as you can get
    i havent lost a brother yet so on that im lost on how you feel
    but i still am sorry for your los
    and i hope you make it though this it makes it so much easyer with your family at your side
    and i am truly sorry for your loss i hope you get though this