The aroma is so peculiar.
The smell of roses goes
Into my nostrils
And dances through my head,
But as it abdicates my nose,
My eyes begin to water
As the smell of fresh flowers
activates and agitates
my allergies. Dear irony!
That the most resplendent
Thing I have ever met
Would have a compelling force
That pulls me in to its arms
Then pushes me from its realm!
Crack the window,
I feel overwhelmed.
A contest entry
- MYSTERIOUS BEAUTY by Swan song.
500 points, ended June 21, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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Very good and thank you for your entry I have some very keen competition this is very good.



