Sitting here on this bench,
snow glistening of the tree limbs,
so beautiful I wish you could see.
You have never seen the beauty,
of the snow.
Never known why I love the country,
this would show why.
I want you here to keep me warm,
to kiss my cold lips,
and watch the sun go down,
slowly slipping off of the ice.
One day you will be here,
and it will be perfect,
all becuase your here.
Author notes
Option 2 - Lonely
http://i285.photobucket.com/albums/ll71/artchwat/snow_bench_tree_trinity_park.jpg
this is for my fiancee Mac...he lives in CA...so far away but close in my heart
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration with Options by Dancing Feather.
700 points, ended July 10, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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interesting
i like this, it has a play with temperature here. the landscape that you see is "cold" and the togetherness that you wish for provides a warmth. and you remained consistent with your images.
Oneal
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thank you oneal.
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I know how you feel. My Fiance Mike lives in Michigan, while, I live in Florida. It sucks truly but we both know we are close in eachothers hearts and that's all that matters, other than the fact we love eachother.
Great write, and thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.
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thats all anybody ever needs to know...is that their love is real...thank you for commenting.
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Good write. Thank you for entering the contest. I wish you luck!
~Ookami~
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