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Part 4: In the Moonlight

The sky begins to grow dark; I can’t believe how fast the days go by
We lie on the sand, still spent
My arm rests under her shoulders, her head rests on my chest
Relaxation

She comments on the sound of my heartbeat,
Places a hand on my chest
“I think I’m going to fall asleep if I lie here any longer”
She sits up and looks down at me

“You can sleep if you want to, babe; I’m your teddy bear”
Her adorable smile enhances the love in her eyes; a reflection of mine
She is so beautiful, framed in the setting sun
I sit up beside her; a tender kiss
My one and only

She wraps her arms around my shoulders; feels the sand still covering my back
“We’re covered; I’m going to rinse off” she says
She stands up and walks to the water; her back, bottom, and legs covered in fine white sand
Something about that little bit of dirt makes me want her gorgeous body…

I watch her dive through the waves; agile as a dolphin
She surfaces and wipes the water from her face, her head bobbing in the ocean
“Are you coming or what?” she yells
No need to ask twice.

As I stand and walk to the water, she throws something at me
It lands on my shoulder and I twitch to get it off
Seaweed?
I hold it up by the strings; her little black bikini.

Oh, you could not get me in the water faster
Not even my growing hardness could slow me down
She begins to splash around
“Save me, I can’t swim, save me!”

Though knowing she is an experienced swimmer, I play along
I think how corny she’s being
But hey; I won’t complain

I swim up to her and scoop her up; a hand behind her shoulders and one behind her legs
She throws her arms around me and feigns weakness
I stand in the shoulder-deep water and fake sincerity
“Are you alright, my darling?” I ask

Her bare breasts look perfectly fine to me

She tilts her head back; “I can’t breathe” she says, that sexy glint in her eye
I tell her not to worry; seal my lips right around hers
All playfulness is gone

She presses her bare chest against mine
The kiss grows deeper as I grow harder, feeling her hard nipples against me
The calm water laps against us
Our tongues fight for dominance; we explore each others’ mouths

One hand caresses her torso while the other supports her back
My finger loops around her bikini bottoms
Time for those to go

I slide her waist away from mine; the cool water sends a shock through me as it hits warmth
My heartbeat races as I slide that black down;
It passes her waist, her mound; thighs; knees
Forget being slow and sensual

I want that off.
Now.

I rip it past her ankles and throw it towards the beach;
Her lone bikini is all that dots the sand.

My eyes look back into hers; the sun has now set
The moonlight sets a romantic aura
She gives me that sexy smile of hers
And I kiss her lips once again.

She pulls away; hold on, something’s not right.
I look at her, confused
She stands beside me, then disappears underwater
I feel my shorts being pulled and I smile

I lift my feet until they are completely off
They are thrown to the beach to join her bikini.
My rod is completely hard by now;
She wraps her arms back around my shoulders

“I have been waiting all day for this” she says
Oh, believe me, so have I.

We’re kissing within moments; hungry for each other
My hands run wildly over her; shoulders, back, ass;
I grasp her breasts between my hands, pinch her nipples tightly
She gasps
I know she likes it rough

She’s been holding my treasure in her hands, and responds with a tight grasp of her own
She pumps me up and down
Adrenaline, hunger; animals

My tongue runs wild in her mouth; my nails are scratching her back
I lift her by her ass; the water supports her
I feel her sweet spot against my own as her legs wrap themselves around me
We both groan in pleasure

“I want you baby” she whispers
She bites on my earlobe
I in turn suck on her neck, kiss her collarbone
Her shoulders are out of the water, and the slight breeze gives her chills
I can make her shake more than that…

I slide her back and forth, letting my own wetness mix with hers and that of the ocean
So wet
I reach the bulge of her clit with my tip and she jerks
Her nails dig into my back
She’s ready

I slide that piece of gold back once more; insert it into her tunnel
A mutual moan
Slowly it opens her wide as her eyes close tightly
“Fuck…” she whispers, biting her lip
Fuck indeed.

I feel her body welcome me; I’m in all the way
So warm and soft
I want her.
I need her.

I lift her ass up and down; pounding with all my might
I want to pleasure the furthest point possible.
Her sighs turn to moans; her moans to gasps; gasps to screams
We’re fucking like never before

Waves splash up against us and between us from the movement
It only serves to increase our already peaking pleasure
We’re biting, we’re scratching

“Fuck baby”
“Harder”
“Deeper”
“OH FUCK”

I take one hand off the ass I’ve been gripping so tightly
I place it in between our bodies
I know she’s close; so am I
My heart races, my breaths are mere gasps; my body is filled with unreleased tension

My middle finger finds her clit
Her back arches; eyes roll back
My cock throbs at her pleasure

An endless stream of “fuck” escapes her mouth
Getting louder and louder
I rub her harder, pound her faster
This is it

Fireworks
Screams
Intense shakes

My body convulses as I empty myself in her
Her body continues to pull me in, contracting, squeezing the juices from me
One final scream; a gasp; a moan

My knees grow weak;
I soften inside of her
She collapses against me, head on my shoulder
Our breathing is so heavy, we can’t speak

That is how we stay;
Water lapping against us, bodies still entwined.
Our hearts beating against each other, I hold my baby in my arms
We relish the perfect moment; the perfect day;
As the moon casts its glow upon us;
Lovers in the moonlight

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Part 4 of 4...sorry for the length =P

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  • Ho74pp1eP1e
    July 22, 2008

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    I thought this was a rush, and a wave of great sensual story telling. Good luck, and what a lucky girl. Always wanted to make love in the ocean.


  • sensualbutterfly
    July 18, 2008

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    This contest is going to be harder to judge than I thought!! Very sensual write. I think I need to go take a cold shower now! Thanks for entering


  • Still single
    July 15, 2008

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    I know its long but i think you've made each line worhtwhile, it's the best of the series that i've read. thanks for entering.


  • indomitable
    July 5, 2008

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    mmm this was perfectly lovely. i adore it. very sensual, but mixed with enough raw male thoughts to make it real. it paints a clear picture, which i love. very nice write, thank you.


  • Travel Notes
    June 28, 2008

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    My my, you can be quite the vicious animal can't you? Definately not the ending I expected but still good. There was definatly a huge change in the overall mood here of the series. I'm not sure that it quite fit with the first three parts.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    June 23, 2008
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    A little racy for me

    I dnt get too far into this type of reads but I will leave a comment


  • Galaxy2
    June 20, 2008
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    Oh my...
    that was wonderful!
    you've got a really lustful beloved...
    I loved her openness...
    Wish I could have her...
    Do you mind, babe?....lol

    Excellent write....
    Galaxy2

  • Galaxy2
    June 20, 2008

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    Oh my...
    that was wonderful!
    you've got a really lustful beloved...
    I loved her openness...
    Wish I could have her...
    Do you mind, babe?....lol

    Excellent write....
    Galaxy2

  • hardeepb
    June 20, 2008

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    My god...

    So well written. This series is beautiful. Absolutely stunning. Your set-up is brilliant. and the raw emotion that comes out just gets me...I pictured myself in there as well. The beach as a fantasy...reminds me all too well of a particular convo that I had with my love...This is a good depiction of it through poetry...brilliant. I just read all 4 of them beside each other...hard to contain myself. It seems 'fantasy' has been the theme for us lately...please create some sort of part 5...or start a brand new...longer series...your writing is beautiful...just like the writer...

    "She presses her bare chest against mine
    The kiss grows deeper as I grow harder, feeling her hard nipples against me
    The calm water laps against us
    Our tongues fight for dominance; we explore each others’ mouths"

    "I feel her sweet spot against my own as her legs wrap themselves around me"

    Our line...

    This reminds me of the convo...our first...erotic convo...me and her...

    10 out of 10. Simple. Write more...please...

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