Held down by the nightmares
That creep..
{I scream..}
Hands that once caressed
Now bruise..
(blood seeps)
Thighs shake as evil
Whispers in the shadows..
{of my mind}
Always haunting..
the pain of invasion..
{will not be denied}
Author notes
Please state with option(s) you chose in your notes and credit pics used.
will be 30-60 words in length and and hour or two to
complete
4)
"Dont Try To Deny Me"
Words : 38
A contest entry
- Quickie time!!! by Weltt.
550 points, ended June 20, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A dark take on that prompt and very much enjoyed. Loved that picture posted. Such a perfect match!
"Hands that once caressed
Now bruise.."
Really like that line. Great job here and thank you for entering!
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wowzers, lovely write, you really outdid the prompt, way better than mine, hahaha. great descriptions and all,a nd love the pic
take care and good luck
stephanie
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this was dark! but a very good write! nice imagery and good luck
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I hate it when life gets that way and you really do wind up feeling like that.
I hope tho that you fight back and don't give up.
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wow....pretty dark stuff!
excellent take on the prompt!!!
best of luck in the contest!!
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Hmmmm... Makes me want to say, fight back!!! This poem makes me want to hurt other people. I don't like invasion.
Good luck in the contest
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speechless
If I understand this right then it brings tears to my eyes. Very touching princess. Well written and emotional. Love you lots, Daddy
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Wow ....loving this ...can be construed on so many different levels....truly great piece of work here
good luck
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Thank you I'm glad that you liked it..
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Best of luck.
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good luck sissy..
Kitty
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thank you sissy..
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yay, good luck
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Yea yea
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