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On Seeing a Beautiful Woman

When motion and emotion combine with grace
In beauteous form and beauteous face
I think (with reverence) this must be
The Gods' own form of poetry.

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  • SerenityNChains gold member
    November 18, 2008
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    Simply....perfect! How well you describe us fairer of the humans


  • alco
    June 21, 2008

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    Good to see you still come to AP from time to time. Gimme a call some time, I miss you.
    Love,
    Monica


  • Swan song gold member
    June 21, 2008
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    Clever and excellent take on the prompt.
    Thanks for your entry well done