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Temptation

You flirt and tease
with wanting me
only I don't see
you tempting me
I don't play games
not the silly mind ones
so don't try to get me
you will never succeed
Your very handsome
but you know it
born with a silver spoon
between your lying lips
cursing from that smile
turns me away from the riches.

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4)
"Dont Try To Deny Me"

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  • Weltt
    June 20, 2008
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    Wonderfully woven imagery and message to boot. enjoyed this! thank you for entering!


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    June 20, 2008

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    I agree with cerulean..."lying lips" I loved that!!!! anybody who knows they are hot, can be very unattractive...I agree. Nice Write!

  • markgrif gold member
    June 20, 2008
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    Oh great take here.

    "lying lips" nice


  • daviscth silver member
    June 20, 2008

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    I enjoyed reading this imagery filled poem. You chose a wonderful title for this and I wish you all the best in the contest.