eternal passageways of fate,
fragmented
through traverses of time
between peace and diabolical angst:
cathartic purging of burdened souls
~ evolving within a spiritual vision ~
emergence from unknownst
for infinity
nascence to perpetual senescence,
manifestations of intensive gilded light
ascension; deliverance of holy graces
into everlasting life
not condemning maledictions
into darkness of evil...
...silencing anguish of trepidation
Author notes
PROMPT:
Picture prompt #1 Evolution_by_alyn
30-60 words of wishful wonder
A contest entry
- Quickie time!!! by Weltt.
550 points, ended June 20, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Congrates
On the bronze my dear sis-star.
Excellent!
I see all that within you is pouring out beautifully.
Even in your sadness, pen on my friend.

Bro Timothy


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This is brilliant!!! your vocabulary was excellent and the way you wove it was mesmerizing. powerfully done for that picture. thank you for your thoughts!


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Great Write!!! Good Luck to you
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Wonderful write ....powerful imagery throughout ...good luck


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cool! I like it

especially: "manifestations of intensive gilded light">>>great line!
best of luck in the contest!


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Good luck sis
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