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Emergence of Fate

eternal passageways of fate,
fragmented
through traverses of time
between peace and diabolical angst:
cathartic purging of burdened souls
~ evolving within a spiritual vision ~

emergence from unknownst
for infinity
nascence to perpetual senescence,

manifestations of intensive gilded light
ascension; deliverance of holy graces
  into everlasting life
not condemning maledictions
  into darkness of evil...

...silencing anguish of trepidation









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Picture prompt #1 Evolution_by_alyn

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    Congrates

    On the bronze my dear sis-star. Excellent!
    I see all that within you is pouring out beautifully.
    Even in your sadness, pen on my friend.

    Bro Timothy


  • Weltt
    June 20, 2008

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    This is brilliant!!! your vocabulary was excellent and the way you wove it was mesmerizing. powerfully done for that picture. thank you for your thoughts!


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    June 20, 2008

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    Great Write!!! Good Luck to you


  • poppa
    June 20, 2008

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    Wonderful write ....powerful imagery throughout ...good luck


  • sailor ptolema
    June 20, 2008

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    cool! I like it
    especially: "manifestations of intensive gilded light">>>great line!
    best of luck in the contest!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 20, 2008
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    Good luck sis

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