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Broken



It's not always harder to keep holding on.
Sometimes it's much harder to let things go..



Your smile still haunts my dreams.
It was beautiful, but the beauty now makes me cringe.
I can't stand to think about you,
The pain shreds my heart.

The beauty in your eyes used to bring tears to mine.
Now the lack of seeing them brings tears also.

They say that what doesn't kill you makes you stronger.
I'm not so sure about that.
I feel weaker and more defeated than I ever have before.

I miss you.




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Author: chrstn

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  • Blumagicizhere
    June 20, 2008

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    NIcely written

    This was a very short but powerful poem with meaning behind each and every word.

    I loved it baby.
    I love you.