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Seven

I break into the silence
I break into the darkness
The stillness conforts it
The hateful souls love it, I am one of them
All my sins are gone
There is only love, forgiving, hope, and faith
My lustful, envy, hungry, greedy, lazy, beautiful soul
I used to be the seven deadly sins
But now I am just plain old me
I used to resemble what the world truly is, evil
Now I love, now I care

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  • ea silver member
    July 17, 2008

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    Hi there, is that comfort with an m? I don't get how you are one of the hateful souls is all your sins are gone but from there on in, the message was clear and a good one!

    Thanks!