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What about Me?

You lied when you said
" I do"
because you did until
you met her one day
the lying begin as you
helped her break in
her new office couch
but what did I do
to deserve the pain
to know that you never
intended to stay with me
just using me until she
became a free woman again
Now I know what it means
to be the one with all the pain
for you are out spending money
and playing your mind games
you want her, you want me
make up your mind, cant you see
she is nothing but fake breasts
and doctored up eyes from surgery
her clothes were bought from her rich
ex husband not by the work of her hands
you stand there and tell me this is what
you want, you need, you have to have
but what about me?

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Word Prompt: Homewrecker

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  • BehindTheShadow
    June 28, 2008

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    What about me? I love that question because it always comes up when a homewrecker enters the picture. Thanks for entering my contest.


  • Kleroo
    June 25, 2008

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    I really like this except when you say "because you did until" I think the wording there could be different it sounds a little funny but really like this