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Damn Weather

In a world drenched with
Depression
Sometimes the sun can't
Penetrate the clouds askew
And with a forecast of death
Life will fail to make it through
Sometimes we want to break
Look and laugh in their face
They don't know what its like
To live in a sun deprived world
Beat off from the light where the
World glows, with their flowers and rainbows
Kept in the dark where the rocks are dull
Hopes have escaped
There’s an abundance of pain
And character shatters at the touch

Nevertheless
When the clouds are blown
By the wind of fantasy
We feel the warmth
For a split second
We feel acceptation
But then
A new cloud of forbiddance
Is blown over
Oh damn this weather!

Author notes

:] I hate weather..it ruins everything!

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  • bloody wizard 2
    July 8, 2008
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    wow this is realy good i enjoyed reading it

  • celadia
    June 20, 2008

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    Oh wow, I loved the part about the depression making other people's stones etc dark. i think you could do a short version and sell it to the Mental Health Authorities for a brochure, I just know everybody will click with it.


    • xcoldxtruthx
      June 20, 2008
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      Haha! Thanks!
      Thats an interesting suggestion..
      about the Mental Health Authorities
      maybe I'll look into it
      :]