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What A Waste

Slowing intentions
I have no reason to hurry
Begin this little deviance
In a slush of frozen fury
Paced, I sink into this lush frame of pillowed
Cages

I'm frozen.

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[#7:: Sloth]

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  • Ethereal One gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    Unique take on the prompt of sloath. The first 2 lines are easily understandable, then the rest is left to the reader's imagination, which is good.

    Thank you for your entry, and best of luck.

    Ethereal One