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smile at clouds

Snoopy dance under droplets touch,
flowing caresses freely explored
while drenched eyes
frown with jealousy.

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Prompt ~ Some people walk in the rain, others just get wet. ~Roger Miller

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 20, 2008
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    creatively engaging... x


  • Stardust-luvr
    June 20, 2008

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    well done my dear one for this gave me an uplifting essence of promise - which beats my last night anyway lol lol each line was magical in its brevity but received an immence smile with the 1st line. xx many blessings always xxx