My swirling world,
Spinning around me,
Beating up my head,
Why can't you see?
Shredding me open,
The disease has spread
For emotion is physical,
Inside my head,
A whirlwind of screams,
A tornade of rasps,
A storm of madness,
I'm sick of the gasps,
The staring faces,
Looking at me,
Accusing my emotion,
For I set it free.
A contest entry
- Raw Emotion by loving.a.soldier.
600 points, ended June 27, 2008, 26 entries
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Comments
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great description of emotions. very well written piece. good luck in the contest
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Very nice! you did a wonderful job with the piece! keep it up! good luck in the contest and thank you for entering
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