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Manicured nails trembled through notes
scribbled furiously within-around gentle faces
of wenches, their names tongue twisted
amidst ramblings regurgitated~

stirred in acidic tone, elevated after presence
tightened stomach and turned flesh in knots
over sight of virtuous competition.

Porcelain contorted within pale frame
blushed brick red
from bitch smack internal smoldering caused.

Conscious created before and after skidmarks
bionic tales told in between;
concocted to condemn the Innocent ones.
[Purge pleasure from self-inflicted pain]

Femme rumored a Daemons dream,
sat like human puppet on rocky pedestal.
Spun yarn to coil anyone who attempted
to question Ignorance or quiet Furor.

Damnation wished upon stars warned to uphold
request or be blasted from Universe
with flick of slit wrists.

Dream-weavers and Dream-stealers
sent to Hell, hateful intentions 'constructed'
from scratch.

Insurance bought boldly from Satan's
middle Minion who held contract, Morals signed
by self-annointed beauty (scarred)
before mirrored shards her fist molested
for telling the truth.



Author notes

Prompt: picture
Wrath- http://www.deviantart.com/print/980286/



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  • Mila7
    July 4, 2008

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    you portray a mighty image of this character, incredibly well done. You an feel her wrath. Congratulations! and this poem deserved it.


  • sailor ptolema
    July 2, 2008

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    wow! this is quite phenomenal...I wrote about the same sin, but I must say, yours is much more insightful! it just spits rage!
    It was a true pleasure to read, and best of luck in the contest

    ~all my best


    Sailor Ptolema


  • Ethereal One gold member
    June 30, 2008
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    powerful message

    Your words provide the reader with some very vivid visions of this person, and the anger that is so much a part of their lives.
    A mood of evil surrounds each stanza, and I can also feel the fear this person eminates.

    Thank you for your entry, and best of luck in this contest!

    Ethereal One