I’ve got moonbeams in my pockets
the sunrise in my eyes,
I’ve got stars in my closet
and I’m in love with the skies
The planet queen
drifts my way,
hurdling through space
just to save this day
A universal thought
a wormhole in my mind,
drift away into eternity
who knows what I’ll find
mmmm the end
Author notes
#4 Stars in the closet.
A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
700 points, ended June 21, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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This is beautifully written. I love the imagery. I felt like I went on a ride through space. I enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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Oh My!!
Oooooooooooooh Wonderful take on the prompt; love the rhyme weaved
These lines grab~ and take the reader on a celestial ride~
I’ve got moonbeams in my pockets
the sunrise in my eyes,
I’ve got stars in my closet
Magnificent I must say~
Congratulations on Your HM!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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pretty wild but i realy liked it
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wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Me like happy lyric!
The first one to make me smile and hum today! -
Wonderful take on the prompt topaz..best of luck..
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