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You think that your white whips
can cripple?
no lies lick thicker than those spoken quickest
let those tears trickle; they are your army
your words can't harm him, he's not starving
for a heartfix like those you'll pick at
trck box fall flat; you've no charm left
to disarm his heart, he's apart and torn from yours
even if he ever was joined
at the hip to your voice, not your skin
your a vice, spice enslaved just to twist
let those tears swirl; your alibi
to root right through each fib you throw
i knew, and now i know.

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    July 2, 2008

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    wow!

    i think this was interesting! your words were pretty straight foward and your emotions were raw! it was like a dark write with light at the end! i like this very much! keep penning kays!

    AWESOME!